Wednesday, February 18, 2009

Think........ in the air !!

For years in passion ..rekindled ..rewashed..
In search of you ... I drifted out to sea
All i could remember was that moment in the sun
When you took away all my fears... Pain there was none


The morning sun..the spring breeze..
A smiling you ... thats all i need ..
Wait for me..dear one...
I'm preparing myself .. Stay ...dont go...


I don't wan't to worry anymore...
I hope I am the man i want to be ...
You stay the same... wait for me ...
DOn't change... I will ...
A better man..is what i shall be..


So in search of you .. I drift out..
To sea ...the seagulls fly over me ...
The cormorants ..they dive into sea
..The big blue... Where mermaids play ..
That's where I hope I shall find you ..someday


Alas the twain never shall meet ... I'm afraid ...I dont know ...
your thoughts visit me like the fallin rain
Stay ... DOn't go !

6 comments:

Urchin said...

Beautiful writing....romanticism defined

Soumabha Basu said...

Surely one of your best...great job...

SUTIRTHA said...

simplicity and elegance personified.......grt writing mate

ICEMAN said...

Fantastic....just one word....Fantastic..

Unknown said...

Personally always felt that poetry that rhymes withe the true self always has a tinge of sadness associated with it....
never mind even the pain slashes you....
take a dip in the emotions...

brilliant writing...

never mind even if the grey shades are too dark..

cheers...

Inertia... said...

this hurts my heart...